- To learn how to fit so many different vocabulary with the same syllables and put them together to make a sense and project a vivid image in the reader's head.
- I would like to develop my choice of similes to make them more poetic and pictorial.
- I would also like to work on not getting nervous in front of the audience.
2 things that Greg or Beth Anne reinforced that we have already been doing in class, or you are already using in your own writing.
- A poem don't have to rhyme to be a poem. They also said that any type of text is poetry, so basically now I am typing a poem and you are ready a poem too!
- Don't be ashamed of your work. Always be proud of who you are and your capability.
Heart is the pumper in the humans body
pumping every kind of feeling
Erupting to the other parts
pumping and revealing
revealing that it's the bank for multiple things
not only vitamins , blood and cells
but also an eraser for thoughts, pain and swells
It's the main feelings bank
can hold more than a car's oil tank
It can be broken in emotion but not in reality
who ever thinks that isn't going through mentality
they sure know it's only a way for spirit to be evoked
I repeat it's just another word for emotional broke
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