Khaleefa's Aamazing Presentation reflection.

I am replying to Ms. Pollock about Khaleefa's amazing presentation.


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* He treats us as if we are his younger siblings. He sits between us and makes us feel like he is part of our class.
* The rap he did at the beginning of the class. It was entertaining and a great way of getting every one's attention.
* The way his words flew, and they way he finds those combination of meaningful words and links them together.
* The phrase in his poem "Don't look".
 "He'd write till his wrists hurts, looking at his insert, it became sweet like a des-ert"


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* When he told us about his poem that's called " it's not a poem". I have read it and like he said, it not just words on paper, it's LIFE on paper.
* He encouraged everyone to write and NOT be ashamed of what they write. Everyone should respect the capability of people.
* The tip he gave us about the more you write the better you get.
It's true. The other day I looked back to the first poem I wrote last year and compared it to the one i just finished last week. There's a major difference!


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* Why is it that you prefer writing all night? Is it just the moment where the thoughts come?
* Have you ever used any resource to find words that rhyme if you're stuck? And how long does it last if you're brain is blocked and you can't write?


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* He's a great role model because he encourages us to be proud of ourselves no matter how bad others think we are. He's also a great role model for those who are shy to preform in front of people.  It's a wonderful influence to show those folks that it doesn't take much to have the guts to preform in front of people as long as you're proud of your work.